Reviews for Mother

Matt

Whoa…. gnarly, gorgeous opener. That first line caught me off guard!!! The voice feels intimate and wounded - the narrator’s “defects” make the exile stakes feel real… and the ritual-to-memory structure builds a coherent, unsettling mythology without losing momentum. The body-horror imagery is tactile but readable, and the final beat - silently tailing Mother into the forest - works as a soft, eerie cliffhanger. Vivid, weird, and gripping. Give me chapter 2 right now!!!

Thomas Mai

Hi Quinny, your story is bizarre, beautiful and scary all at the same time. I am so happy you said yes to join Suspense Club as more people need to discover your unique world building. I cant wait to see how far you will take this story.

emz_mcmanus

Such an incredible introduction to your world. Everything was described with vivid details which really helped to bring me into the story.
Can’t wait to read on!